Christmas
2010-12-16 @ 06:51:01
"I'm dreaming of a white Christmas" yeah, that's true. I hope on the Christmas will be a lot of snow all around the world. Today I go to show a children my Christmas decoration. I enjoy spend time with them because they are so cute.
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mistake
children - it's more than two kids, so you must use THE instead of A.
You're wrong.
You can't write 'I'm dreaming' beacuse we always use verb 'dream' with SIMPLE TENSE
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