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2010-05-05 @ 17:55:40
We had only thirty minutes to do it. To cap it all Hawk (teacher's pseudonym)was talking continuously to us! She is unbearable!
I wrote I had flown in Majorca with my sister. After arriving there we started our adventure. (When I wrote it I didn't know what was the adventure because 'I used my imagination'. At that instant I lost an inspiration.) My sister had been laying on the beach and I had been swimming and diving. Suddenly I saw a long white limousine with Hugh Laurie inside.
At the end (the teacher had just taken our 'essays') I wrote it had been the worst holiday and I had envied my sister who was closer him.
Now my short story looks quite better. But now I'm at home and I don't feel unsettled!
All in all the few sentences which I created aren't enough for me and especially for Hawk :(
I wrote I had flown in Majorca with my sister. After arriving there we started our adventure. (When I wrote it I didn't know what was the adventure because 'I used my imagination'. At that instant I lost an inspiration.) My sister had been laying on the beach and I had been swimming and diving. Suddenly I saw a long white limousine with Hugh Laurie inside.
At the end (the teacher had just taken our 'essays') I wrote it had been the worst holiday and I had envied my sister who was closer him.
Now my short story looks quite better. But now I'm at home and I don't feel unsettled!
All in all the few sentences which I created aren't enough for me and especially for Hawk :(