Dreams and money
2009-03-11 @ 12:57:19
I love films art. When I get in to the cinema , I get into the world of mystery. My favorite films is a different films come from other countries in the world. I going to “Discussing Film Club” because there we can see different people which living in other countries. Their life is different from our but also this same as our. This same dreams about better life. Matters our life: job, money , love, dreams, travel , our friend, death etc.
The magic of cinema would be also caused by music. I like music film for example: John Williams music and Indiana Jones adventures.:-)-all films by Cejrowski Wojciech. Your book “Gringo wśród dzikich plemion” is very interesting and was written in very good style.
My love to cinema and book cased my curiosity to world. We should to relize our dreams. We should to start of control our safings. No loaf at the beginning. No drinks alkohol and cigaretes. I order Beata Pawlikowska's book “ W dżungli życia”.
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allaround
It should be 'I like cinema' becsuse you like cinema in general, not one building.
I see you have a slight problem with articles ;)
I'm not really keen on cinema, I visit it only from time to time. You're right as to the statement that we should be unafraid to chase our dreams but I can't agree about drinking. You think alcohol is bad at all or only when we abuse it? IMO there's nothing wrong in drinking ocasionally.
allaround
It should be 'I like cinema' becsuse you like cinema in general, not one building.
I see you have a slight problem with articles ;)
I'm not really keen on cinema, I visit it only from time to time. You're right as to the statement that we should be unafraid to chase our dreams but I can't agree about drinking. You think alcohol is bad at all or only when we abuse it? IMO there's nothing wrong in drinking ocasionally.
johnfreeman
Thank you for a comentary:-) Of course I think that nothing wrong in drinnking ocasionally but I law that very little people can drink ocasionally. My life in Poland and adventures to muslim's coutries learned me that alcohol changing our mind , our behavior and even religion. Very interested is a art of Jack London "John Barleycorn" alcoholic memoirs.He was very clever and succesing man who died in 44 years old. Unfortenatelly your dead caused "white logic"- this is London's words. Book which I served was a last book this's writer.
I will be grateful if you show me my mistakes in my English language. What does it mean : articles : (gramatyka?)
Salut ! Have a good day!
allaround
Oh, there's lot of them...

Not 'I get in to the mystery of world' but 'I get into the world of mystery'.

'we can see different people which living in other countries.' - Should be 'different people living in our country'(żyjących w naszym kraju) or 'different people who live in our country'(którzy żyją w naszym kraju).

'Their life is a different of' - should be 'Their live is different from'

Articles(przedimki) - a, an, the.

caused BY music(spowodowany muzyką, wywołany muzyką - probably that was your point?)

You wrote 'Book ... is very well style of write' - and should be: 'Book... was written in a very good style' or 'writing style...'.
good(jaki? jaka? jakie? - dobry, dobra, dobre)
well(jak? - dobrze)

Wow, that's enough for now I guess ;)


Adventures in muslim's countries? Sounds interesting. I've never been even to other continent than Europe. I don't like travelling anyways but I like to get to know new people or learning about their culture etc.
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